Proposal Feedback

When asking potential readers about my ideas I had many comments as to what they felt would improve my ideas as well as how to make my magazine interesting 

Amy "I like the concept of your magazine, especially the genre, soft rock. I like the colour ideas and the ideas about what will be in it"

Nathan: I don't like parts of the context like the shopping, I want to completely read about the music but I like the idea" 

These are two main quotes which I have read and believe have really helped me in the decisions I have made, such as colours and context.